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wip image by SannyF wip image by SannyF
a image i like to get some feedback on thanks :3
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shawthehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
Well, I love how you did this, your art never ceases to amaze me :)
If I had to give critique tho, then I'd say the only thing that bugs me a bit is that his musculary chest seems a bit too squarish. I don't know if it's wrong tho, my anatomyskills arn't so good xP
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thehatinthecat Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
Not bad, the only things I can think of is if that's a shirt he's wearing the lines are a little to stiff even with the folds, also with how tight his pants are around the crotch something should be a bit more visible if you get what I mean.
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SannyF Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
working on it ^_^
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thehatinthecat Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2006
Cool! I can't wait to see the finished work
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TheFwank Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006
That right hip seems to be at too severe an angle relative to his torso... To get that degree, his legs would need to be farther apart and his other hip would have to be twisted behind him somewhat, you pelvis can't just rotate like that without screwing up the required angles of the legs too much...

Like the clothes and the hands, though.
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SannyF Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2006
fixed hope its better now >_>
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bigfluffykitty Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006
His neck does not appear to be entirely centered on his torso...
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derpdawg Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006
Damn your so goddamn good... XD *envies*
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alexkl5 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006
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It, looks pretty good, a lot like you're other drawings.
Sorry, may need a little time to critique it more deeply. (I'd like it if his hair were longer, but that's more of a personal opinion...)
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SannyF Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2006
Thanks.
Well take your time :3
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